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Kiviana
Haley Ruth-Ann Sterne
United States, California, Moreno Valley

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Stride of a Hero

Within the burning blaze lies certain death
A walk within ensures the pain
And concludes the envy

Yet far be it exceeded
One brave soul treads through
To save a life worthy

Finding victims relentlessly
Unkowning he will soon be one too
That fatal step!

Lost is he behind the smoke
The burning flames
Never knowing what a hero he was

He died that night
With pain and relief
The scorching flames burned him

Yet he suffered none
For he is the one
who whouldn't give up...

....someones life for his own.


Haley Ruth-Ann Sterne

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Comment by: - 2006-04-10 02:28
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That's powerful stuff, i like the imagery and pacing of it. good job.
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