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Kiviana
Haley Ruth-Ann Sterne
United States, California, Moreno Valley

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The End

The choking lifeless corpse,
lying before you.
Shattered by lies,
horrible truths.

Stabbed in the back,
So horrible,
Say its un-true.
We could be friends again...me and you.

Yet your hearts unfeeling,
Cold and lifeless.
Shattered before mine,
led down a whicked path.

With a fire inside,
Raging with envy and hate,
You came after me,
you braved the good life

Exchange it all,
the joy and the hopes,
Shared dreams, friendship,
For death. The death of a friend.

The knife is still bloody.
The pain still fresh,
Go ahead try to retract your steps,
Wrench back your knife.

The damage is done,
it's to late.
Can I trust you?
Why should I stake my life?

Its not worth it,
the pain you cause.
Its not worth it,
the life you ended.

Lying before you,
The corpse of a strangled friend,
here I am,
no opptions but the death you delivered.

I fear it's the end.

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idolyouth Comment by: idolyouth - 2006-07-09 10:00
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that was so strong, i particuarly liked "The knife is still bloody.
The pain still fresh," those lines really stood out to me, its fabulous.
2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2006-07-01 10:20
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This was really emotional. Brought back the pain of loosing a friend in a not so great way. Great job, I thought it was a great poem.
jagainst Comment by: jagainst Online- 2006-04-10 11:13
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Really powerful lines here--you express confrontation with the end of a relationdhip turned wicked with ease.
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