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nazH
nazario castaƱeda
Mexico, edo de mex, texcoco

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embrace my pain

needless to stay here or anywhere
it`s getting darker, too late
it`s the right time to leave and to forgive
my wayback down begins again, nothing else i need

the seven seas come crashing in
while shiny stars are desperately crying
my soul is slowly fading
i`m bleeding and tenderly dying

won`t you die with me?
won`t you cry this once eternal love?
embrace my soul and my pain
embrace it all
give a shelter out of this world
give your blood
surrender your soul.
embrace me darling
while i`m tenderly dying.

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JKRojahn Comment by: JKRojahn - 2006-04-10 13:33
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Excellent piece; I love your writing style. This piece is very dark and dramatic, I really love it! Great job and keep writing!
deborah V Comment by: deborah V - 2006-04-10 13:03
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dark, delecate and delicious! "embrace me darling
while i`m tenderly dying." very nicely put, and the flow throughout is satisfying.
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