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psgri2003
Paul Grimsley
United States, Florida, New Port Richey

My Bookshop
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boozy bluesy doozy

arteries, veins capillaries:
how do they work as distilleries?
oh, it helps me be expressive --
don't mind the manic depressive:
he'll just sit here
and cry in his beer;
drink in the new year,
one for the road, one for the fear.
many an advertising exec is a vulture
swooping in on drinking culture:
pick diseased flesh from binge drinkers;
like an idiot drawn to piss-head thinkers
a naive man embraces it all ...
preserved in alcohol: a rapid fall.

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jadedsubmersion Comment by: jadedsubmersion - 2006-04-12 20:48
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ouch. this hit a sore spot for me.. my mother was an alcoholic and i watched her drink her life away. the last line is a perfect depiction of alcoholism.

i have to bookshelf this, despite how painful the memories are that it brings back.
Comment by: - 2006-04-11 07:14
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at last someone has written a poem about me
Comment by: - 2006-04-10 19:35
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hmmm...but i like the booze...
Comment by: - 2006-04-10 18:32
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Another hard hitting ending. Alcoholism is never an easy hurdle for the bystander or the consumer. -Leah
Comment by: - 2006-04-10 16:39
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...hic~
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