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When on resurrection morning I again may see your face
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Such a sweet, tender, and deeply felt tribute to someone you loved, obviously very much.
I would like to see a bit more metaphorical imagery in the 2nd and 3rd stanza to convey your love and your fond dream of meeting again.
