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Manda
Amanda Walczesky
United States, South Carolina, Lexington

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A Treat

vanilla whipped
and sunshine dipped
the skin of your back
attracts
luminescent
a flavor so delicate
one slow slide
down the length of your spine
fragments time into
bite
after
bite
just a hint of mint
crushed, on ice
and the tingle of
a cinnamon stick
too sumptuous to eat
in one sitting
perhaps you should lie down
a languid buffet of hard
candy and syrup-centered
chocolates
in the end it all just melts
and the smiles run in
technicolor stripes
down the drain

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Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-30 21:17
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Great. Now I'm hungry and ... never mind. What a great poem, Manda. I love the sexiness, but there's such a playfulness here, it almost (almost) overshadows the sensual nature of it. Almost. :) One of your best. T. xox
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-15 17:31
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wow again this was really good. I took it less litteral and more sexual, lol really good. Great, fantastic!!! (this is going on my bookshelf)
Comment by: - 2006-04-11 16:43
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That was really interesting how it seemed sort of sexual. Yum.
jkaber Comment by: jkaber - 2006-04-11 15:14
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You know how to put sounds and images together very well. Especially loved the first five lines.
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan Online- 2006-04-11 14:05
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delicious!
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