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Funkylele
Daniele Ponzi
Canada, Ontario, Toronto

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Eyes Slaves to Need

This is the cross-
The poet cannot look away.

Morphine the moment,
Numb it down,
Or join the glitterdust parade,
Hum catchy melodies
From life's radio cabaret.

The haze of alcohol
Is doomed to coalesce
Into some sweet and
Somehow recognized
Intensely meaningful shape.

And you grow tired of
All this observation.

The dance of atoms
Pinballing through time
And space is just the
Backdrop for another
Killer segue line.

A clever kiss!

Sometimes we weave
Bright chaos
Born of madness,
Or track with mathematical
Precision every step
Through a geography
Of surgical incision.

And you grow bored of
All this observation.

I am slave to a need
That is no greater or lesser
Than any other.
It is merely
Packaged with cunning
And alluring anecdote.
An evolution of outsanity
(that's now a word-I said so).

A club of cool
A school of fools
And yet...
And yet...

We have this one small
Sphere of gravity pulling
From the core,
This one rare gift and curse
That paves our way;

The Poet
Cannot
Will not
Look
Away!

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bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-04-22 15:39
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I can't look away, and i'll never grow tired...this is very deep man, very cool. alcohol seems to intensify every shape into something meaningful- love your choice of words!
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-12 18:01
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I enjoyed reading this poem but i didnt like it as much as the other one i commented on, "I disbelieve." I am not saying this one isnt good it is jus that i am not that deep. lol sry, i am very deep and can understand metaphors but i am not thhhhaaattt deep so I didnt understand it as well. But it is a good poem.
Comment by: - 2006-04-11 07:58
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good work man bon bon....school of cool
Funkylele Comment by: Funkylele - 2006-04-11 07:38
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Good point Ron, I realized I was missing a line to complete the thought and separate it from the glitterdust parade. I meant to highlight the two extremes...remaining numb or losing oneself in an excess of trivial sensory input and distractions.
thank you also Jay. I actually had a typo there. the second time is meant to read "incision"
Ive edit the piece but for some reason the Edit feature on SI is malfunctioning right now. HOpefully will allow me to upload fixes later.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-04-11 07:09
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This is one of your strongest rhyme schemes. I like the bridge parts, adds effective rhythm to carry the poem to the end.
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