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sita
sita varrier
Qatar, DOHA, QATAR

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a year ago

The day creeps up on me
A day, a year ago
So different from any other.
A celebration of an acquaintance
unlike any other.
The eyes that turned to me
filled with mystery, strangeness;
The mystery i probed,
and the strangeness wore off
the days disappeared.
Now, i turn my eyes to you
For you to read in them
The message I have for you.

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frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-17 13:37
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thank you so much for the comment!

i enjoyed this poem. nicely done!
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