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Comment by: - 2006-04-13 15:27
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| 'perfect arc / perfect bow' fantastic. It's like word association, one image running into the other. Great stuff, as always. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-12 02:31
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| What a clever idea for a poem. Descriptive. I like the pattern. |
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| reason for the seasons .. I mean sneeez'ns ...to get a blessing -sorry couldn't resist .. this is mmm more than special |
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| You were very visual with your rain storm, but I do not see any reason for sneasing, or is that the whole point? |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-11 11:08
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| Simple and descriptive observation. I'm missing the humour thought.-B |
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