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| You have made it with this poem. |
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| You write so real, always touching on something many people can identify with. |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-04-26 09:05
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| Really like this. I like the way you write. You've captured the thoughts of many people with this. Excellent. |
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| I have felt this way so many times; you have put it into words beautifully. I also love the "forest of thought" image; it makes me think of how muddled the brain can get. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-18 05:14
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| I like the opening line, for me it relates to the idea of walking through life unnoticed, overshadowed by the more outgoing, confident people. I don't know if thats what you wanted it to mean but I could really relate to that. Great poem. |
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