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Dance6
Ashley Woods
United States

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I, a poor little slave girl

I, a poor little slave girl

With nothing to eat but a piece of pork fat and some crumbs of bread.

I, a poor little slave girl,

My mama's illiterate and my daddy was killed

Killed by that fat, greedy, rich white man who lives in that big white house which sits upon a hill.

He calls himself my masta'

He say he own me

He don't own me! Not as long as God is my father

I, a poor little slave girl

Trapped

Trapped between these rows of cotton

Trapped on this plantation

Trapped in life

This is not only a poem, this is my life

The life of a poor little slave girl who is trapped in her own life with no way out

I, a poor little slave girl

With nothing to eat but a piece of pork fat and some crumbs of bread

I, a poor little slave girl.

 


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Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-07-18 07:56
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Thank you.
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2006-07-17 23:12
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powerful! how did I miss this upload! The repetion is tremendously effective and makes it sound more alarming and heart breaking. It took courage to go there--you did a wonderful job of it. great job.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-21 14:02
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Thanks you!
Comment by: - 2006-04-21 14:00
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This is DEFINATELY a powerful poem. i like how you say that she trapped between rows of cotton. I agree that the dialect adds to the poem- it makes the reader almost hear the voice of the little slave girl. Wonderful job.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-19 08:29
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Thank you. I was in a good mood so I guess that is why. Thanks!
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