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Hi Mark,
I think you should enter some Haiku competitions. You will really give the judges some food for thought when they see the originality of your thinking. So many expressions from a single verse- inspiring! |
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| sounds as though you're speaking through the earth's eyes...great job. Your haiku is very descriptive and brings the sense of ominous passion. the "April's reign" was perfect. well, if you aren't that versed in haikus, I'd say your efforts are incredibly promising...I personally have none posted, though I may sometime soon...take care and great poem again. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-13 15:20
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| I love the choice of "reign" in this poem. The April showers never had a more eloquent salute. - Leah |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-13 11:48
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| Short but sweet. Yes how do you choose your words when you are limited to so few? Nicely done Mark.-B |
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| Thanks for the nice comments guys.Thanks (Gary) for the inspiration.I did mean reign...oops. |
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