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The Hardest Words to Say
His fingers traced patterns across her soft, milky flesh. She sighed contentedly in her sleep and a grin spread across his face. She curled into him and he laid his arm across her warm back. He could have stayed like that forever.
Even after she left, her scent lingered in the room. He could still feel her warmth on the sheets, still see the slight indent in her pillow. He briefly entertained the idea of a shower but decided he didn't want to wash her away just yet. He wanted to bask in the afterglow of another of their meetings for just a few moments longer.
She thought writing it in a letter was a poor way to do it. Emailing him was even worse. And no, the phone wouldn't do either. It was her choice, even if it felt like she had none, and she'd do it properly. He deserved that much. But just as she wasn't sure exactly when she fell out of love, she didn't know the words to tell him it was over.
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| Good read. Particularly enjoyable and mildly sad. |
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Comment by: Jack - 2007-04-17 19:25
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| sexy then sad...I liked it, but wanted more detail |
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| A myterious encounter, sexy indead! |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-13 19:03
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| Thanks for the great read. Could do with a bit of tightening up but otherwise you have said it clearly and with excellent imagery. |
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| like this a lot. especially like the space you have created by not filling the piece with useless detail, in doing that you have created a mood and an air of mystery. nice use of language too..makes for a special piece of writing. really cool. |
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