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Ryan Akorli
Ghana, Gt, Accra

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The Heavens laugh

                           
THE HEAVENS LAUGH

The Heavens laugh
The Heavens laugh when times are near
And the human mind can no longer
Comprehend the realities of today and yesterday
When society is immersed into empty
Darkness and can longer see

The Heavens laugh
When souls are wailing yet deny themselves
Where they belong
The Heavens laugh

The Heavens laugh
When the devourer is out yet does
Not stand a chance in the battle

The Heavens laugh'¦

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MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-07-15 08:53
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good flow to this piece. it flows from beginging to end very organically.lovely word choices, the work and flirt with eachother in a really effective way.

good piece over all, the theme is understood.
Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2006-07-12 19:41
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Ryan, I liked the uplifting spirit of this piece. To me it revealed that many of the things that we weigh of such importance here on earth are laughable up in Heaven. That's my take on it anyway. --Robert Barlow
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-06-29 20:53
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Great piece Ryan. Heavens laugh and i laugh with it. Excellent message.
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-06-10 10:03
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I call it being in the moment and shining the light. AS you do
Comment by: - 2006-06-05 02:27
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sadly, im sorry to say, the hurt of this earth has grown to such proportions that it is echoing into the "heavens." i know this only because i have been shown it in a vision. the time is NOW. the hour is NOW. i have been shown that we have 7 years before the change happens. NOW is the time to free the self from the fear and hurts and desires of this earth. NOW. we have run out of laters. so be it.

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