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A Necessary Evil (Haiku)
Yellow dust in air
Stamen and stigma delight
Olfactory hell!
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Comment by: - 2006-04-24 12:15
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| Good piece but I'm missing your more lengthy poems Mark. Sorry but that's the way I feel. -B |
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| Okay, I admit with much embarrassment, I didn't know what "olfactory" meant. Wow! I'm dense sometimes. With that off my chest...nice piece, Mark. Witty, charming, and quite appropriate for the season that is now upon us. Good one, bud. |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-04-14 16:44
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| superb....well written...really good |
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| a totally sweet poem! way to describe the sinus problems we face. very clever, but not hard to understand, another impressive haiku... |
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I find this to be an overly clever haiku. Though it is not as based off nature as traditional haiku is (i think less nature based haiku ahs a different name)
Very good write. keep writting, love to read more :) |
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