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Comment by: Scribe - 2006-04-19 04:31
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| Very cute. "Tigers on their prowls" gave me a chuckle. Well done. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-16 09:52
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| love it!!also so true of people!! |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-04-16 08:50
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| Love it. Reminds me of so many people I know who have certain idiosyncrasies. Also love take helminthophobic has on it. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-14 17:31
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| i have to say well done!! i can appreciate the elderly women!! just refreshing!! |
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I don't really like these charcacters; they are snobs of the highest order! The "Rose" determined to rid the world of the "dandelion", the "Lake" and the "Rose", powerful, majestic images attacking things they feel are "common". The "silver" of their canes furthers their association with the upper classes. Their dismissal of the rest of the world in the final line is heart wrenching. The childish language ("bestest" etc.) suggests that they are not only snobs, but dimwits as well... THE SNAKES NEED REHABILITATION, NOT EXTERMINATION!!!
Excellent poem! |
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