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lofty
lofty
United Kingdom, Bolton

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Mistake?

Silhouette is perfect
Your form complete
Features exquisite
Smell so sweet
Taste like honey
Hot to the touch
Heat over powering
The want so much
Skin of silk
Thighs inviting
Breasts so full
Inside is tightening
Pressure finding love not fear
Down your face a solitary tear
How can this wrong feel so right?
Why should we forget about tonight?
Don't make lovers out of friends
So easily said
The story ends.

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Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-09-22 20:14
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You hsve the plot for a short story or even an entire novel here in only 73 words. Very nicely done.
Comment by: - 2006-05-23 13:01
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"Down your face a solitary tear
How can this wrong feel so right"?
If it is wrong and it feels right, maybe it is not so wrong at all?
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-23 07:09
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Brilliant writing. 'Pressure finding love not fear' - great, great line. Bookshelved.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-04-16 14:50
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Nice statement, it is truthful aswell. It is very easy to betray and lie to a lover.. but not as easy to betray and lie to your best friend. A good look at human nature.
timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2006-04-16 12:20
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Great. As always.
"Donā??t make lovers out of friends" - good reason!
Thanks for sharing.
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