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Dance6
Ashley Woods
United States

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Like they say...

Like they say,

Hate is strong

But I say,

It is not strong enough

I have a hate

I have a hate for someone constantly filling me up with disgust

If I were a judge I would charge him for attempted murder for attempting to kill my life

Theft for stealing all that I have

Manslaughter for ripping, cutting, slashing every bit of my soul apart

I gave him my tears but he comes back for more

If I were to die, he wouldn't care

In his mind, I am his rug

His floor

To him, I am dirt; just another thing to pick up after

I try '¦ it makes no difference

When I talk, he goes into a sudden deafness

My joy, his hell

My hell

His joy

Hate, not strong enough

It is inaccurate, erroneous, distanced for this feeling I have

Hate,

Not strong enough

 


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Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-06-22 16:22
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THX!
stopxlightxgreen Comment by: stopxlightxgreen - 2006-06-22 12:30
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I like the violence and imagery in this poem. The words have a certain snap that lends itself very well to performance poetry. You should go to an open mic reading and perform this piece out loud.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-05-03 07:51
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Thanks!!
erniegirl26 Comment by: erniegirl26 - 2006-05-02 19:14
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wow, that's really amazing. I absolutely loved it. I like the way you described all the crimes that he is guilty of...the imagery is brilliant.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-30 07:14
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OK. thank you!! The sad poems I write are just from how I feel.
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