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| I love the analogy of a 'piece of paper caught in the wind'.. it personalises this piece, and allows the reader to picture the atmosphere invoked by your words. |
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| very nice. enjoyed this one a lot. |
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Wow, there was something captivating about this poem. I loved it. I enjoyed reading it.
Retaining the mystery,
Making the three months spent
Feel as if it were an instant
These lines ensnared me...bookshelved! |
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Always moving
Retaining the mystery,
Making the three months spent
Feel as if it were an instant
I know that feeling...very nice poem. I agree with complicated, that reading it out loud makes all the difference. Great job! -Bon |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-05-21 07:22
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Into my life she came,
As a piece of paper caught in the wind
Passing me by
Catching my eye
great words here..great poem. |
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