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Every thought
Unoriginal.
Every thought,
Already brought up before.
No thought,
Belonging to an individual.
Everythought is its own
There to be grasped
And Examined by
An empty scope of perception.
Departing;
Leaving an imprint
On the domes of our planetariums.
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there's a cynicism here that I really enjoy. only thing that got me was the missing space between every and thought in the seventh line. I could see you tightening this piece up and it being a grand statement about originality.
This is brilliantly written, I love your use of repetition here - very effective. Also, it has a good pace, I like the words you've written together. It moves as swiftly as thought itself. Great theme too!
