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On the orbed weaved web
The morning dew sits;
Emblematic is the spider.
Catching dreams of the night.
The spider;
Natures dream catcher
Contemplating which dreams
Are to be weaved into the web of time & history;
The prosecutor of fate & destiny.
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Dew water
Fluid like our dreams
The spider's web,
Capturing the paragon of dew water,
The paragon of our dreams
the web Perfect preservation
capturing
Of our Dreams.
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A dream catcher spider is quite interesting. Other than the repeated use of the word dreams, the piece is lovely. Sometimes not saying it directly as much is more effective. jmo ;)
Really cool expression utilizing the nature of a spider's web catching the dreams as drops of dew with timely repitition. Has a real organic tone to it. Much enjoyed.
