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mooseturkey
Tom Wells
United Kingdom, Kent, Dover

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Smiles

If laughter is the soul speaking, what on earth's a smile?


Is it the hearts way of showing how it feels and why?


Or maybe it's the mind, doing its little bit.


Acknowledging something good happened, not just something shit.


Maybe it's subconscious, a way to welcome in


All those around you, to share this wondrous thing.


One thing about smiles, they happen when you're happy,


That is why I always smile when you are with me.


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Comment by: - 2007-05-08 00:09
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Smile and the whole world smiles with you.
If only it was that easy... Good work.
KeepBreathing Comment by: KeepBreathing - 2006-07-27 13:34
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I liked this one as well, you are very good.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-07-21 13:04
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very bold word choices over all in this piece. there is an innocent charm to this piece.

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Acknowledging something good happened, not just something shit." -- nice bold line. great writting, keep writting. thanks for the read.
SpadedHeart Comment by: SpadedHeart - 2006-06-22 17:43
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sweet moment
Comment by: - 2006-06-14 15:12
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It was alright, though I don't think it flowed as well as it could have. Makes you think a bit, I guess.
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