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carolinagirl
Miranda Rawson
United States

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Judgement

Why do you stare?
Why do you glare?
Why can't you just accept me for who I am?

I am unique,
Not a following uniformic lamb.

You all judge me,
Because I am different,
But you are all the same.

Laughter,
Taunting,
Teasing.
When will it end?

When my soul is dead,
Will you understand?

Because I have different beliefs,
I cannot have relief,
From you defeaning blows to my heart.

Even my kin,
Think I am dimwitted,
And wrong.

So here is my plea,
Don't judge,
Don't laugh,
Don't taunt,
Don't tease.

It hurts your friends,
And the ones around you.
Now, will you see?

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awesome Comment by: awesome - 2007-04-18 11:56
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Very very neat. I can totally relate to this. All through elementary school I was teased because of the way I dressed, and for my beliefs. Now that I'm in eighth grade, though, I have new friends, and I don't get teased as much. Very neat job.
awesome Comment by: awesome - 2007-04-18 11:56
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Very very neat. I can totally relate to this. All through elementary school I was teased because of the way I dressed, and for my beliefs. Now that I'm in eighth grade, though, I have new friends, and I don't get teased as much. Very neat job.
carolinagirl Comment by: carolinagirl - 2006-04-16 17:07
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Thank you!
heartlaugher Comment by: heartlaugher - 2006-04-16 08:08
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When something is written from the heart and soul it shows.This is dripping with real emotion.Great job!
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-04-15 17:49
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oh ok
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