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Manda
Amanda Walczesky
United States, South Carolina, Lexington

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Just Like This

sugar
warm
a simple rush
it all just comes in a single push
a single kiss, soft lips, soft eyes
yes, yes
inside, inside
where its warm inside
sunlight, comes pouring in
into the mouth of love
sugar warm addictive kiss
hard as stone
in a river of darkness
follow the path
slide, deep down inside.
you find your way
I'll find mine


12/5/01

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inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-30 19:47
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Great write. Especially love the ending.
colindardis Comment by: colindardis - 2006-04-26 09:44
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"it all just comes in a single push" Wow, love that line, very sensual and provocative. Effective writing, full of desire and unabashed enjoyment, the words simply revel in the physicality of the subject.
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-17 13:00
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this one is really cool too. loved it.
Comment by: - 2006-04-17 08:20
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great visuals here.
jagainst Comment by: jagainst - 2006-04-17 05:31
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Oooh! Sexy! Really dig the line "sugar warm addictive kiss" It's kind of funky and playful. Good stuff.
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