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carolinagirl
Miranda Rawson
United States

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The Horse

The horse is
Beauty in motion,
A loyal partner,
An honest friend.

A portrait in disguise.

Their manes are like cascading water.
Tails are proud, silky banners and
Coats shimmer in the daytime sun.

Muscles ripple beneath slick pelts.
I catch my breath
As their shadows dance
In midnight moon beams.
 
Large, kind eyes embellish
A forgiving face,
Yet passionate blood
Roars through their veins.
 
Horses are sacred,
Horses are benign,
Horses are wild-
Horses are free.  

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superjosh Comment by: superjosh - 2007-04-28 15:56
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Horses are beautiful creatures and you really make sure we know that in this poem. I really enjoyed this.
awesome Comment by: awesome - 2007-04-20 11:23
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Amazing. All so true! Horses are so amazing! Very nice. : )
awesome Comment by: awesome - 2007-04-18 11:59
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That is all so true!!!! I LOVE horses, I live in the city, but I live near the country, and I take riding lessons. I would give anything to have a horse. Very neat piece.
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2007-03-11 23:08
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This is lovely. A horse is a beautiful animal. I love horses, but I don't own one. The one suggestion I have is either make it singular or plural. You started out with one horse and ended up in the plural.
Sabrina Comment by: Sabrina - 2007-01-05 13:42
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You must love horses very much to of wrote so vividly. It is very beautiful, keep up the great writing!
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