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In 2 Deep

Let me whisper this in your ear

Feel my words as they travel your body's every curve,

moisturizing your body's every nerve, sufferacating your soul

with breathtaking whispers, injecting innermost desires as my

words enter, releasing your waiting to exhale speechless fires,

replicating sounds, of touches unfound, wrapping my tongue

around your mind, leaving your mouth sprung, tingling (you're

all mines) throughout your spine, penatrating vibrations of

endless echos, teases your wildest dreams to let go,

absorbing into your every move, intrudes your imagination,

into motionless anticapting, your emotions of confessions,

enhances my devotions of romacing, unconditionally devours

your mind, body, and soul relentlessly, accessing your

intimaticy, making love to you mentally...without one kiss and

without one touch my words are already in 2 deep....


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xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-12 00:12
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This is good, except for a few spelling errors.It's suffocating and penetrating. Nonetheless, smooth stuff.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-20 08:29
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".without one kiss and without one touch" --sometimes words are better then the real thing. No, I take that back the real thing is much better! A good read, a great write. **
clariann Comment by: clariann - 2006-05-21 15:01
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very erotic and sensual, leaves a warm feeling
angeldawn21 Comment by: angeldawn21 - 2006-04-22 11:17
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I love the message, but it would be interesting to see how it changed the piece if you played with line breaks. I think the reader would get more of the message. The content is spectacular!
mommaZ82 Comment by: mommaZ82 - 2006-04-19 16:47
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Damn! What a way with words!
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