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| this is pretty deep and sad. i dunno if i like it because i have just come out of a relationship but then again i do like it because it makes pain so real. i can't believe you live in st francis. it's so beautiful there. i went for my matric holiday last year. i love how all the houses are white with black rooves. i'm jealous. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-21 01:24
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| thanks for the comments , i was kinda spitting out the words ,im a little irish and have a temper to go with that .... hee hee |
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Comment by: Rae - 2006-04-20 09:18
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| my goodness.. I like the intensity of this poem...almost as if your spitting it out with disgust at the person it's directed to. I love it. And the repitition definitly works to the advantage in emphasizing certain points. ooo, and the last two lines...I love them. almost like a paradox.. I love it. thank you so much for posting ;) And believe me, I know what you mean about poetry setting you free... I feel the same way everytime my words go down on paper. Always good to have an outlet...so as not to allow things to get too bad, and/or to overwhelm you. And of course, as we look as writing like this, the outcome of such a catharsis never turns out too badly right? lol thanks again for this piece |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-20 00:16
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| thanks , ive been having a weird time lately , poetry sets my feelings free ... |
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| Woh, this is a great piece of writing. Love it x |
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"We The People"
After dozens of cities are destroyed by nuclear bombs, a group calling itself 'The People' issue demands.
They want the militaries of the world to disband.
The CIA has only the video demands to work with but must find the enemy quickly because governments are starting to comply.
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