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mrRidd
Garth Wood
United Kingdom

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A Better Life

Little Josy kneels against her bed with her hands together pointing up towards the ceiling. 'Please just one day, just one day', she cries as tears ripple down her face drenching her starchy unwashed sheets.

Screams of gashing blood and pain echo up the long staircase as the constant pounding keeps reverberating through the walls.

Josy's father, a beast of a man, Robert as some call him, takes pride in slaughtering his victims, tearing them apart and making them beg and scream for pure pleasure, pure disgusting pleasure.

Body parts litter the kitchen table and blood covers every surface. Robert stands with a blood-stained cleaver in his hand and a grin on his face. The mince meat he just made of the man lying on the counter gives something to him that only he will know. He slams the cleaver into the wooden door post and heads for his daughter's room.

Josy clenches her wet sheet as the house goes silent, no more pain and no more blood. She stops crying and listens, her heart racing and pounding in her little chest.

Covered in blood from head to toe, the butcher stomps up the staircase. He grunts and moans with every step calling his daughter's name, 'Josy--', 'come on out--', 'it's dinner time.'

Josy jumps up wiping her eyes, rushing around, gathering her clothes and stuffing them into an old broken suitcase.

The monster knocks on her door but Josy doesn't answer. 'Ya not gonna make me angry again are ya--', 'ya know what happens when I get angry.'

He knocks again, still getting no response and begins to get very agitated and upset. 'That's it you little whore'.

The door crashes to the floor as he bashes it with both hands. He walks in finding an empty room with the curtain blowing up from the wind entering through the open window. The lonely moonlight shines in onto the bare wooden floorboards and the wind and rain scream outside.

With all his might and strength the monster tears the room apart, upturning the bed and pushing down wardrobes and tables. The rage inside him intensifies with every thrust until he can no longer bare it. He falls to his knees right where Josy was, crying with his face in his hands, feeling pity for his only daughter.

Josy left, she left for good this time. No more pain, no more terror in her dreams, she's free, but with nowhere to go.

The rain gushers down from the black heavens above enslaving the dirt road and the one street lamp beneath it. The trees whisper a soft growl as the wind passes through them.

Out of the blackness comes running a little figure, looks like a little girl. The bag she carries alters her balance as she sprints down the road.

Little Josy has escaped and she only thinks of getting away. Her bare feet grind into the ground below and her wet hair clings to her face. She wipes the water from her eyes and pushes herself with absolute determination; a rare trait for a nine-year old.

The train is late tonight, but just on time for Josy to catch it. She slips in the side carriage when no one is watching and curls herself as tightly as possible to attain just that little bit more warmth.

She keeps one eye open as she watches the light above, waiting for green. That's when it's final, that's when the life she once knew will be lost and hopefully driven deep underground where no one can find it.

Finally the light flashes green and the signal is ordered to depart. The train starts edging forward when a voice from the other end of the platform yells, 'We have a rider!' The breaks are heard being forced into action and the train comes to a complete halt. Coach guards run towards the back end of the train searching for a rider-- a term used for someone who hasn't purchased a ticket.

Josy's heart pounds once again and she pushes herself even further into the floor boards, hoping that nobody will notice her.
She hears someone sprinting down the other side of the train. She looks up and a boy, about her age, jumps into the carriage and ducks down under some dirty wheat bags.
She doesn't know whether to be happy or more terrified. If they find him they will find her, but the fact that she's not alone in this gives her some unknown hope that perhaps it will be alright.

She looks through a little crack where the carriage walls meet and sees the guards dragging a man into the nearby station cabin and a man yelling, 'All aboard!'

The train starts edging forward once again. This time no one shouts and the train picks up pace jostling along the railway line.

Josy settles down and is about to stand up when she remembers the boy jumping in earlier. Looking around the carriage and not really knowing what to say she whispers, 'Who are you?' but gets no reply. 'It's not going to do nobody no good you just keeping quiet, I know you're there.'

Finally a voice whispers, 'Where did you come from?'

'I was in here before you', Josy explains.

'I didn't see you.' the boy answers.

'I saw you jump in, was wondering whether to tell on you or not.'

The boy sniggers and then mutters, 'Would do you no good, you'd be in the same keep as me then, best to keep to yourself.' He pops his head out from under the wheat bags and sticks his hand out to greet Josy, 'I'm Ben.'

Josy shakes his hand and answers, 'Josy.'

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HemzPlaza Comment by: HemzPlaza - 2006-04-23 02:57
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh just when I was caught up in it all! It was intriguing from begining to end. Im waiting for the next part.
mrRidd Comment by: mrRidd - 2006-04-17 06:20
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Thanks a lot. I'm actually putting together a storyline to make this into a full story. What I plan to do is have this as the prelude -- what happens to Josy and Ben -- and then perhaps write a novel or something similar when they are older.
Litotes Comment by: Litotes - 2006-04-17 05:21
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nice, It was fast paced and i like that because I get bored easily and you kept it interesting (I didnâ??t skip a line) but now what? Come on I was really into it, what happens next? ... I'm going to look for more
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