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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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the pain of betrayal

The dark foetus of hatred grows stronger in the womb of my black and withered heart.

Each day the sorrow greatens.


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Comment by: - 2006-04-17 14:04
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Yay! I love this. Thanks for posting it up. Not the same without the picture, though (for those wondering, Drowning is a friend of mine)
kissykissy24 Comment by: kissykissy24 - 2006-04-17 10:39
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a true poet- so much said, so elegantly, with so few words. unusual metaphor.good job.
Litotes Comment by: Litotes - 2006-04-17 08:47
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A powerful 25 words. The title really ties it all together, without it you don't know why such deep hatred mixed with sorrow.
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