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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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The Stars Explode Tonight

My soul is elsewhere,

Slumped in the corner of my room,

I look around with new eyes.

My floor,

Black,

Spreads out and away from me,

Glistening and out of reach.

Posters lear.

My skirt writhes.

I can't feel my feet, I curl my toes but I can't feel.

I think of you.

You should see my scars.

My eyes are streams of sorrow.

I fly with you.


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Comment by: - 2006-04-17 14:03
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Drowning, you read my mind! I lke this a lot.
d13tp3ps1 Comment by: d13tp3ps1 - 2006-04-17 09:22
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i like this, because you haven't tried to be pretentious with it.
nice job!!
<3
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