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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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Our Sauna Song

We spent a week of

SUN

+

sand

+

SEX

+

stillwater.

Wandering through the forest glades,

Swimming while the sun set,

You danced for me.

Every night entwined we slept.

Together


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Comment by: - 2006-04-17 15:34
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like the every different structure of this one and the change of pace from sex to romantic....
Comment by: - 2006-04-17 14:01
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Such a cool title! Great poem.
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