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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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Barefoot and Running

The 5.55am odyssey.

Lost in a maze,

Created by a mind daze.

Will had gold teeth and a fur pimp coat.

He took me to a gaybar the night after.

He was a light weight,

He was sick and stumbled.

Outside, out of sight.

Time passes with or without me.

Mikey's mind wandered,

So did he.

He left me.

Semiconscious on the chair.

He left me.

As you unlaced my boots.

He left me.

They left me.

With You.


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Comment by: - 2006-04-17 13:59
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Cool.Very dreamlike. Surreal. Like it very muchly
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