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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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Are you thinking of me when you fuck her?

You used to tell me you imagined she was me.

Her body melted into mine when you were with her.

And now I'm gone do I haunt your dreams?

Are you still thinking of me when you fuck her?

 

Now that you are home and I am home,

A country apart but bound by a night.

Are you consumed with guilt every time you look into her eyes?

Are you thinking of me when you fuck her?

 

I know I cut you up when it was over.

Do you bleed for me and greive for me?

Now you've moved on can you forget?

Will you be thinking of me when you fuck her?


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fureyaersoy Comment by: fureyaersoy - 2007-06-17 13:38
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Very powerful almost hurting.
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inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-04-22 06:48
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Impressive, powerful words. Like this a lot.
Comment by: - 2006-04-17 13:58
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Verrry cool. Very you, Drowning.
Patty Dohle Comment by: Patty Dohle - 2006-04-17 13:41
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Alanis reference?

I sense a lot of bitterness in this. Makes it very powerful. :)
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