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Comment by: Stefan - 2007-07-31 09:28
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| Very clever wordplay. |
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| Thank you all for your wonderful comments! |
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| Deborah, I really liked how you manipulated the language on this one. It caused of number of differing images to crash together while I was reading it. Well done. --Robert Barlow |
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Comment by: LadyC - 2006-06-28 15:36
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| This is totally indecipherable to me and I think that's the way you intended it to be. Reminds me of T.S Elliot. |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-01 11:19
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| This is the kind of peice i love. There is no simple way of summing this up, and its hard to tell whether Deborah wants the reader to fully comprehend the intended notion or not. I think this is an amzing piece which involves the reader line by line throwing you in an extreme direction and swiftly pulling you towards the next. A hundred diffent images here at least and the ending is remarkable! TOP MARKS !! This is by far and the way one of my favorite peices that i've read recently. Thankyou Deb x |
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