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Elinki
Chris McGuffin
United States, Colorado, Arvada

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Conception of God

I have a proposition for a definition of God
Care to converse?

Omnipresent-
Viewing and experiencing every conscious happening
On every level of understanding
Thus
Every being within the universe
Must be an extention of God

Omnipotent-
Capable of anything
As long as each variable is applied correctly
To the situation and matter at hand;
Through instinct or creative inovation
Making every creature in the universe
Imbued with an ability of god
Thus
We are beings of divine inheritance.

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mitra Comment by: mitra - 2007-03-17 02:49
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why not?
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2006-04-19 18:56
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An interesting chain of causation in how you arrive at the conclusion.
This is a philospohical-theological debate that still ravishes the minds of the psyche, the world over. Very tightly written, with a singular argument proposed.
JKRojahn Comment by: JKRojahn - 2006-04-18 20:37
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I agree that the concept here is very interesting and of course everyone is entitled to their own beliefs and opinions. I think this piece is something that will be very contemplative to everyone and is very well written. Nice work and keep it up!
redbirdjazzz Comment by: redbirdjazzz - 2006-04-18 16:38
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I really can't agree with this, but it is quite well written. It's an interesting idea, but it doesn't work for me. To each his own...
:-)
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-04-18 10:10
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My best friend preaches that line at me nearly every day.
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