I'm not living I'm just killing time
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I'm not living I'm just killing time
A shooting star,
An angel falls,
Deadened eyes,
Lips turned blue,
Sallow skinned,
From dreams of you.
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| the seperation of the lines only adds to what is an already perfect poem |
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| IF only...I could write and have such a tainted veiw upon the most simplexity of all living and none living items and or subjects..I do enjoy this as well as all of your rest,esspeically the newest additions...with warm regards,Sheena |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-18 14:28
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| cool title... like the brevity says a lot in few words...cool cool |
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