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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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She Falls

My eyes are open,

My mouth is shut,

I've fallen down a deep dark hole,

I'm stuck in a rutt.

Slut.


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fallenangel Comment by: fallenangel - 2006-11-29 13:57
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there's something differnt about this from other poems about love after the high, it better than them
Comment by: - 2006-04-19 02:11
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cool , sweet poem
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-04-18 15:10
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Well done on this one.
Comment by: - 2006-04-18 14:43
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don't quite know why but i really really like this
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