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BloodyMuffins
Chelsea Watt
United States, MA, Newburyport

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Suicide Note One

Death.


Reincarnation.


In our dreams.


Birth.


Who do we praise?


Simple.


Ordinary lives.


Sorry for stepping on your toes.


Smile.


Apology accepted.


Clowns.


Birthday.


Slaughter.


Photograph.


What a mess.


Smile.


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shannariley Comment by: shannariley - 2007-11-02 14:59
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What does it all mean anyway? It fell like patters of rain on the roof...endless words, deeper meanings, lost ways...all that makes up this thing we call life. Well done, I feel.
crystaltest Comment by: crystaltest - 2007-05-06 18:17
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I liked this piece. Very simple but very effective. While reading it, it seemed as though I was hearing the words being spoken aloud instead of on the page. That doesn't happen to me very often. Thanks for sharing.
Comment by: - 2007-02-13 22:26
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that!and all the inbetweens!

...and i liked how you spaced everything...cool shape.;)
DirgeTheDay Comment by: DirgeTheDay - 2006-10-30 02:56
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wow. less is more. so true.
that realy struck me deep. I felt as if someone just told me thier whole life story in a few words, and the pain of just smiling through it all.
good job!
Sanketmishra Comment by: Sanketmishra - 2006-06-29 03:24
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Beautiful,no more words really.
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