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Mousieme
Crystal Tyler
United States, Oregon, Madras

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Will You Be There?

When the sun goes down and the moon comes up,
Will you be there to watch with me?
And when the owl calls and the wolf calls-
Will you be there to listen with me?
When I feel dispare and sadness inside
Will you be there to hold me tight?
When I tell you I love you-and look in your eyes-
Will you be there to return the phrase?
When I get the courage to kiss you so sweet
Will you be there to feel my embrace?
And when I decide to grow old with you
Will you be there, in my home too?
When I can no longer whisper or stand,
Will you be there-holding my hand?
Will you follow me too-
As I have followed you-
Back to the clouds and the heavans above-
So when the sun goes down and the moon comes up
Will you be there in the stars with me?
Looking down on the owl that calls and the wolf that calls...
Will you be there with me?

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Zuanne Comment by: Zuanne - 2006-07-06 10:20
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I dont care who howls, I certainly can relate to those very same insecurities! It took me back to a phase in my life. Thank You for sharing your thoughts, and clarifying mine.
Zuanne Comment by: Zuanne - 2006-07-06 10:20
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I dont care who howls, I certainly can relate to those very same insecurities! It took me back to a phase in my life. Thank You for sharing your thoughts, and clarifying mine.
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-21 13:34
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like hulshizer, i think the wolf should howl and the owl hoot. personally, i feel that it would make it better. nice poem as a whole tho.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-04-19 13:18
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Nice poem but it would be better if you did not have the owl and wolf making the same sounds.
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