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DROWNINGinYOU
amber martin
United Kingdom, Southampton

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I'm not yours

You'll grow to love this feeling

of never feeling,

Spireling in a termoil of dispare,

I'm down on the gound

I can't feel my body now.

Just leave me here

to self destruct.


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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-11 07:18
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Interesting Piece :)
Georg Wood Comment by: Georg Wood - 2007-03-31 18:50
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love the raw starkness to this concise poem
fallenangel Comment by: fallenangel - 2006-11-29 13:54
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i cannot experince emmtions or even give them names but if i ever do i shall know i am never alone
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-20 13:19
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aw. that's sad.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-04-19 06:13
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Revel in all of that angst now, while you are young enough to enjoy it. When you get older, it will be like wearing an anchor around your neck while swimming in deep water.
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