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To feel you
To feel your love
would be warmth on my soul.
To feel your touch
would be like rose petals on my skin.
To feel your kiss so warm on my lips
would melt my heart.
To feel your body so close to mine
would cause my knees to tremble.
To feel you beside me forever
Would be like heaven on earth.
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| THis is very sweet and romanitc. It's also the way I feel about my man, you stole the words right out of my heart wonderfull job.... |
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| I thought this was a simple but very romantic poem, I liked it very much. |
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Softly, softly.
Romantic & sweet.
A wonderful sensation,
if only to keep.
Easy to read,
heartfelt in show.
A minor improvement,
Consider the flow. |
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| Nice , sweet poem . could be a love-song. |
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Comment by: - 2006-05-12 09:40
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| I like that easy read, romantic, and a feeling I would love to have from a love. |
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