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I love the way
My name looks
When I place
Your last name
After it.
It looks right
It feels right
It has to be fate.
God has led us
Together.
I feel that in
My heart right now.
No promise I give
Because I can't
But my heart
You have
Gift Wrapped.
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I feel you have all the right thoughts in mind. I also feel that the way you set your write out, it should rhyme. It didn't! If you are going to write a poem that does not rhyme, I suggest that you just keep it all in one, no stanzas. I liked your words and the sentiment, that was great!
Frances.
