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youngroyalty
Ryan Akorli
Ghana, Gt, Accra

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Music on the strings of love

Heroes play on the strings of love
Yes, men who have tread on dirty
Grounds now play on the strings of love

Look at them, yes heroes they are
They play on the strings of love
With eyes wide open
Eyes that can no longer close
For it can see not look any longer

They play on the tightened strings of
Love with high pitch
This music is only for heroes in love
So they play alone and listen alone
Alone they live their lives with meaning

Heroes who fall in love play on the strings of love
They play music that holds them in love forever
Music that baths them as twinkling bells ring
Music that leads them on and on
That there is no restriction

Yes, the heroes music, on the strings of love they play

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stopxlightxgreen Comment by: stopxlightxgreen - 2006-06-23 10:41
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This would be very good to recite because it uses good repitition and the words sound nice together out loud. You should perform it sometime.
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-06-10 10:01
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My hero's are the soccer players that are in the world cup at this very moment. To be one in a game of many.
Open eyes open hearts open to the spirit within.
Suzanne
Comment by: - 2006-06-10 09:01
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Love the repitition of the music...wonderful poem. Look forward to reading more of your work. - Leah
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-05-26 21:25
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Music with this would be great. Was listening to some music while reading this and it seemed so natural.
MaryannWebb Comment by: MaryannWebb - 2006-05-21 10:05
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I would love to hear this piece turned into a song.. i think it speaks to people; too many people have given up on idealistic principles and daydreams... it shows the softer side of all people, even tough, brave heroes - it takes enormous strength to run with your feelings, and even more to share them with others and this piece encourages that exploration.
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