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SpadedHeart
K SpadedHeart
United States, Texas, Fort Worth

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Love You Just The Same-

Love You Just The Same

'Lyrical Radio Version

 

I have dreamt I was knocking at your front door:

Left everything behind that I thought was true;

Feel how I am burning in my need for you;

Trade the distance for a moment on your lips.

These borders have no meaning.

 

I am tearing away all this barbed wire causing this pain,

This love is not a game; it's just getting through this distance

Time is going to take care of this anyway.

Once I am there all other fears will be nothing to this distance.

Whether I am here or there: I am going to love you just the same

 

I have dreamt that I was lying next to your side:

This is the image of a reality I want to have,

Help to cure this yearning.

How I wished I could eliminate time to be near you.

Dreaming I was already with you.

Waking up is my fear.

 

I am tearing away all this barbed wire causing this pain,

This love is not a game; it's just getting through this distance

Time is going to take care of this anyway.

Once I am there all other fears will be nothing to this distance.

Whether I am here or there: I am going to love you just the same.

 

Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved

 

 

K

 


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ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2007-04-30 09:23
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Gorgeous.
Loved the way you seemed to incorporate sweetness and pain in this. Thanks for the read.
jagainst Comment by: jagainst - 2006-04-22 20:55
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Another really strong one. Love the repetition and the strong emphasais on closing the gap to be near this person. Really good.
Comment by: - 2006-04-20 16:33
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really like "its getting through this distance"...cool
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-20 07:48
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oo. nicely captured! i love the words and images you chose to use here. very nice.
lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-04-20 02:04
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fantastic..
wonderful..
love it,love it.
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