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This is an automated response.
The machine has turned us into idle talk.
Program the robot to feel,
because the human feels no more.
Religion programs the ritual,
while the spirit is open source.
Expressions evolved into a formal binary flow.
The development of numbers is change...
...And time is calculated in seconds versus kilobytes.
Cryptographic missions translate
into the logic, patterns, and numbers
changed.
Simplified and multiplied
into an equation...
still
conforming.
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Comment by: - 2006-12-22 12:02
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| if you do this spoken word, you could spit to a back beat of Ministry's TEST -- the fit would be superb :) |
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| This was enjoyable. "Questionable" might not have been the best choice there, i agree, but i love it when you write "Religion programs the ritual, while the spirit is open source." It shows the merging of spirituality and technology evident in your poem. |
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| I like this a lot. I think man's relationship with technology is something new for people to philosophize about. I don't feel like the line "Nature is a questionable princess" really goes with the rest of the poem. I absolutely love the first and last verses though. |
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