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How will this world be I wonder....
Beautiful, colourful or great?? I ponder..
How do humans look ...I am curious??
Are they gentle, humble or always furious??
Oh!! I am waiting to come into this world..
Waiting to live, talk and to be heard...
My parents...how do I call them ??
Mama??..or..papa??..or should I ask them??..
I can hear them speak....I can feel their touch..
Oh!! I enjoy all this very much...
Want to see you mummy and daddy....
To be loved and cuddled by you, very fondly...
Suddenly I hear mum-dad say...
"Let's have an abortion right away!!!"
I fear, I panic...I wonder.. I cry...
Why on earth do they want me to die??
I want to live and bring home joy..
I am a little life and not a toy..
I would complete your family and bring you joy..
"Oh!! Please.. Please I don't want to die"...
Let me live and you shall...
How beautiful your world will be'¦
Take me as a blessing and not a curse, Oh! Dear,
I shall bring you happiness and joy forever!!!!
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I loved it. The only thing I see wrong is the double punctuation. The double question or exclaimation marks are unneeded. If you use one your point comes across fine. Otherwise it was rockin'.
