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Comment by: - 2006-06-01 14:47
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| We all have days when we think these thoughts. Superb job here! -Leah |
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| great style man, you get your message acrosss every time, without ever having to hammer it in. |
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| great poem. great ending...'please no tommorrow'. i've said that to myself hundreds of times...when the hell is it going to end? sorrow is a nasty friend. great job expressing those feelings. cheers to oddfruit...stay fresh baby! |
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Comment by: - 2006-05-11 12:35
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| you've captured the mood very well and highlighted the isolation that sorrow engulfs you in. |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-05-10 08:08
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| really loved this..good one from the odd one. |
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