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MarieStarr
Marie Starr
United States, New York

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Bring Yo' Own Bliss

Ain't no shame in yo' game girl


Men be playin it all the time


Ain't no crime in yo' rhyme girl


You just keep tryin to get yours


Cause you know


I'll be tryin to get mine


 


Don't need no reason for the season


Don't need no false grin upon yo' chin


Don't need no man to tell you how yo' lookin'


Cause what you got to be


Is lookin' in


 


Ain't nobody but yo'self


You need to answer to


And if a man be tellin' you otherwise


You need to be telling him yo' through


Ain't no question you can ask yo'self


You ain't already got


The answer to


 


Just open up girl


Wade through that shit's been piled up


Behind yo' eyes and recognize


Cause you know


what's comin' next, girl


Don't be actin' all surprised


 


It's just like Mama Lena always said


You got it in ya, girl


You got it in ya


And whatever it is for you


You got to find it for yo'self


Cause ain't nobody else


can find it for ya


 


Girl, you just got to be


That's right be


Be in your own body


Be in your own mind


Don't be sittin there thinking bout


What some man think of yo' behind


Come back up into yo'self


and recognize


 


You are a goddess girl


You are a queen


Can't listen to no one else


and what they say they be seein'


you got to see it for yo'self girl


you got to be in your own self girl


you got to be


 


A wise woman once said,


'everyone's just tryin' to be happy'


and she's too true


Cause no matter what they do


or what they done to you


it all comes down to this


they all just tryin' to be happy


with where they're goin'


trying to be happy with


where they're at


 


We're all just searchin for our own bliss


and you may find it in some man's kiss


but that shit's fleeting


that shit don't last


 


What you got to do is open up girl


what you got to do is find it in you


then you carry it with you and there it is


wherever you may be


and if you find yo'self in some man's arms


succumbed to his wildly delicious irresistible charms


it will be there too


cause you brought it


 


But if you be waitin' on someone else


to bring yo' bliss to yo' front door


be it in a look or a dance or a kiss or


maybe a little something more


you gonna be waitin' a long damn time


and so I wrote for you this rhyme


to be telling you


 


not to lecture or to preach to you


not to judge you for what you do


or do not do


because I am where your at


tryin' not to let my insecurities


get the best of me


tryin' to be happy with


what I've got


and I'm just tellin' you what I keep


tellin' myself


hoping one day


I'll believe


 


you are a goddess


you are a queen


you are a woman, girl


and that ain't no small thing


 


No matter what others may say


or try to say away


you got to bring it with you girl


you got to bring it on


 


c'mon


let me hear you say it now


 


I am a goddess           I am a queen


I am a woman                  and that ain't


no small thing


 


I am a goddess           I am a queen


I am a woman and           that ain't no


small thing


 


I am a goddess           I am a queen


I am a woman                  and that ain't


no small thing


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RatatoskWritings Comment by: RatatoskWritings - 2006-06-25 01:02
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Great rhythm and metre - I hadn't realised it was an open mic one until I read the comments - certainly well written.
greensleaves Comment by: greensleaves - 2006-06-23 12:27
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I like the style, and the complexity that digs itself deeper and makes you think. It's very interesting and much more than appears at the surface. I also really like the consistency in the way you wrote it and at what instances you broke that, giving a really poignant effect. Well done.
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-06-03 07:08
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oh yeah!

Checkout Fredav's "Woman" . Look in my bookshelf if you cant find it.
wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-04-26 10:08
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this is great I can see how it would have been affective at a open mic. Love the message love the affirmation. Great stuff
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2006-04-21 13:31
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i liked the rhythm you used. it was very effective too. nice job.
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