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Funkylele
Daniele Ponzi
Canada, Ontario, Toronto

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Pray

My violent hands of verse

My arms of prose

My dancing and

My fucking

Are what prevent me from

Hammering my fist down

Your bullying throat

To rip the lies out from

Your beating heart

You know I could

You murdering fuck

Don't you own our mythos

And our common lore?

Creation is the path

Of perfect prayer

It frees us from our ego's fear

That fuel for insecurity and violence.

Creation is catharsis for the soul

Violence an imperative of flaws.

Create.

That's how Gods forgave.

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Red Pulp Comment by: Red Pulp - 2007-10-21 17:30
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The best poem I've read today. It is simply excellent. Thank you.
wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay Online- 2006-05-16 19:52
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yeah funky...big stuff, nice job. I love how deep you go
noneedtofocus Comment by: noneedtofocus - 2006-05-10 10:01
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"Creation is the path/ Of perfect prayer"

Goddamn. I'm not really sure what I can say. Perfect line, great poem. Bookmark.
Comment by: - 2006-05-09 15:25
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Great depth and insight. Hits you in the gut and makes you think. Thank you for sharing.
Khema Comment by: Khema - 2006-05-08 06:50
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oh my. :- hard ass transcendent boulders trampling on my psyche ... K~
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