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nazH
nazario castañeda
Mexico, edo de mex, texcoco

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DeaD LovE

i dreamed of a time so bright, so warm
no cold, no need for shelter
and no fear of coming nights uncertain
in my own little heaven
i wish something could matter!...

...cuz i´m alone
nothingness is my trutH
but still dream of you
lonelyness is my own

i know our love is losT
it died at daWn
you are forever goNe
now everythinG will be dusT.

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greensleaves Comment by: greensleaves - 2006-09-11 04:55
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Good job at line ends. It's good, but I wish there was more details. :)
nazH Comment by: nazH - 2006-04-25 10:18
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yeah, sorry i guess i missed the "i" i still dream of you.


thanK YoU. !!!! = )
Comment by: - 2006-04-21 19:33
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very nice work. one little thing, do you mean 'but still dream of you' or but I still dream of you? Pretty peice.
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